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a nightmare

Posted 2007-02-01 22:00:36 | Comments (2)

     A nightmare

I had a dream last night

My baby and I was being hunted

Being hunted by an evil devil

Here and there

I ran and ran , and couldn’t stop

Still I had nowhere to escaped

Still I escaped nowhere

From the sky came a butterfly

…..

I cant remember whether my baby was saved

Only tears splashed when I was awake

In the dream , I was trapped, threatened, bruised and battered

But I didn’t feel any pain when I was awake

I suppose, only because I was still in asleep.

                                      Lu

                                      Beijing

                                      Monday, January 22, 2007

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The last two lines really hit hard... "But I didn't feel any pain when I was awake I suppose, only because I was still in asleep." That is so profound...to describe one's waking life as "still asleep"......and very sad, too.
Posted by Monica Feb 2nd 2007
tnx,monica,really, many tnx for your reply,indeed. i only expressed a bit true feeling in the bottom of my heart, and you got it. you got what i wanna say and what my true feeling is,yes, all lies in the last two lines. 你真诚的朋友 路辉 北京
Posted by luhuixxx Feb 2nd 2007
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