ah, just one thing! [洗う] is "to wash." I guess you wanted to say "払う(harau)" which means "to pay." however, the rest of the text is very good! There are actually some small mistakes but we can understand what you are saying perfectly, so I guess it doesn't matter :D これだけ上手に日本語が書けるなんて、とてもすごいと思います!