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ElRicoakaricki

Poems

Posted 2007-08-21 15:53:15 | Comments (5)

I am a poet, i like to write poems,i hope you can give me alot of feed back on my poems

Tip of your lips are like tips of roses,
especially when ever i see it i feel like its spring when it's sprouts out
and the teeth is the center piece of the rose,
when putting that rose to their nose close,
where people await and be amazed from the scent in there nose,
and especially when you smile...it's the pedals rose that make it so outstanding,

I see a diamond rock in your eye is that your pupil,
So glittering and flattering,i see something that few people will,
light is reflection but i got to say my eye loves to see your reflection,
what a sensation, shivering by nervesness yes its tempting but not temptation
Something rushing in my mind,you got my blood pumping high
your beauty release less gravity density,because when i see a beauty so fly
it reminds me so much of a butterfly with so much designs and interiors
so natural comparing an opposite side which is feminine u make it superior
and everything else thats beautiful compared to what i see in the eye its inferior

knowledge is the key to success
let me borrow a ledge to press
and write what i know on paper
so when i look at this i can remember
that the knowledge that i hold
will make the beauitful things unfold
why do people say you can't,i don't know
the thoughts in my head running slow
the negativity growing by my disbelieve
So impatient i don't see what i can recieve
i can do all the things,in what ever i believe
i play with these words in creative means
meanings that i describe in creative seens
it's like filiming a movie capturing the scenes
basically it's imagination coming into life in my eye
knowledge is what you cant feel but see i don't know why
knowledge is about knowing..so i question everything i don't know
having this knowledge and curiousty it what makes me come to know.
on the things that matter and don't matter is it science? do you know?

 

 Lifeless without you here /

 because when you are here /

 i find a reason to live once more /

 night and day i hold her tightly /

 i hardly take her out my sight /

 but whenever i do i'm not just missing her /

 i'm missing the feeling that makes me want to live /

 

      sin vida, sin ti
porque cuando tu estàs aqui 
  encuentro una razòn para vivir otra vez,
 noche y dìa la sostengo con fuerza
 dificilmente la saco de mi vista
 pero cuando sea que lo hago, no solo la extraño
estoy extrañando el sentimiento que me hace querer seguir vivo
porque ella es mi vida
---by lost

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no "by me".... I just did the translation ! xD...
Posted by lost Aug 21st 2007
true:P
Posted by ElRicoakaricki Aug 21st 2007
I forgot... sorry "sin vida, sin ti aqui".... Im very sorry
Posted by lost Aug 21st 2007
Me gusta... pero definitivamente me gusta más en español!!!

Posted by luzdeluna Aug 23rd 2007
wowww =D
Muy bien!! tus poemas son muy buenos ;)
Me encanta que LOST y tu sean colaboradores XDDD jaja ;)
Posted by belen Aug 28th 2007
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